兴趣敲开了我的英语学习之门；当我打开“摩洛幼儿英语”app，.好奇的我一瞬间被里面精彩的内容吸引住了；古怪而新奇的动画，是那么的吸引我。清脆而动听的声音，是那么的顺我耳。回答正确后的那句“你真棒”让我心里美滋滋的。钓鱼游戏收获“鱼”的感觉给了我巨大的满足感：尤其大炮打单词的游戏，胜利的感觉是那么的让人如此的陶醉，让我玩得不能自拔......。在游戏中学习的感觉就是不一样，棒极了！

现在的我，已经逐渐把英语融入了生活，英语动画，英语电影，这些都在增长我的不少知识，偶尔冲着爸爸说几句英语，经常把他弄得一头雾水。每日坚持听2节英语课，更让我学会了很多很多初中的知识。

兴趣可真是一把神奇的钥匙，他开启了我的英语之门！

英语我作文篇2

everybody will learn to grow up, when they are small, they have to overcome all kinds of problems, because they are young, so they will take more time to grow up. the road to be mature is not easy, the kids should learn to be nice to other, be considerate and take care of others. of course, it need time to be an adult, the road to grow up will be mixed with happiness and sorrow.

每个人都会学着长大，当他们还小的.时候，他们不得不克服各种各样的问题，因为他们年轻，因此他们要时间来成长。变得成熟的路不容易，孩子们应该学着对人友好，为人着想和照顾别人。当然，长大成人需要时间，成长的路上有欢乐和泪水。

英语我作文篇3

unit 1 can you play the guitar

dear sir,

i want to join your club to help kids with sports, music and english. my name is mike. i am 15 years old. i’m a student in no. 1 middle school. i can play the guitar well. i can sing many songs. i can swim and speak english well, too. i think i can be good with the kids. i also do well in telling stories.

i hope to get your letter soon.

yours,

mike

unit 2 what time do you go to school

谈论日常作息习惯：《 my school day》

i am a student. i usually get up at seven, and i eat breakfast at seven thirty. then i go to school at eight. school starts at eight thirty. i eat lunch at twelve. i go home at 17:00. i often eat dinner at 19:00 and then play the piano. i do my homework at 20:00. at 22:00, i go to bed.

unit 3 how do you get to school

1.主题：上学的交通方式；2.写作思路：开篇点题，点出自己的出行方式；3.具体内容：自己选择这种交通方式的原因；4.结束语: 表明自己的观点。

?the best way for me to go to school》

different students go to school in different ways in our school, but i llike to go to school on foot.first, i live near the school, so my home is not far from my school. and it takes me a few minutes to get there. second, there is a crossing on my way to school, and sometimes the traffic is very busy. i think it is safer to go to school on foot. third, i think walking is good for my health. it’s a kind of sport and it makes me study better.

so in my opinion, the best way to go to school is on foot. what about you

unit 4 don’t eat in class.

dear tom,

thanks for your last letter. you want to know the rules in our school. now let me tell you about them.we can’t arrive late for class. we can’t talk loudly in class. we should keep quiet. when we meet our teachers on our way, we should say hello to them. we can’t eat or drink in class, and we can’t listen to music or play games in class.

i think we have too many rules. what about yoursplease write and tell me.

yours,

li ming

unit 5 why do you like pandas

?the animal i like》

there are many kinds of animals in the world. what animal do i likelet’s know her.

many people like her very much. i also like her. she is from china. she is very cute. she doesn’t eat grass and meat at all. she eats bamboo every day. she is so nice. she is black white. she has two big black ears and eyes. and she also has black legs and arms.

what animal is sheshe is a panda. i like panda very much. do you like herwhat animal do you like

unit 6 i’m watching tv.

it’s seven o’clock in the evening. kate’s family are all at home. kate is doing her homework. her father is reading a book. her mother is watching tv. her grandfather is listening to the radio and her grandmother is cleaning the room. her sister, betty, is playing computer games. they are all enjoying themselves.

unit 7 it’s raining!

?the weather in beijing》

hello, everyone! i’m from beijing. do you want to know the weather in beijingnow let me tell you

something about the weather here.

in beijing, spring is very short and warm. in summer, it’s very hot, but it often rains. we often go

swimming in the river. in autumn, the weather is very dry and cool. we often go to the farm to work with the farmers to help them. in winter, it’s very cold, and sometimes it’s snowy and windy.

i like swimming, so summer is my favorite season.

unit 8 is there a post office near here

?where is the hotel》

let me tell you how to get there. go down this road and then turn left. go through first street and second street. when you come to third street, turn right and walk on. you can see a bridge over a river. go across the bridge. then you can see the hotel. it’s on your right, across from the post office, you will find it.

unit 9 what does he look like

?lost》

kate, a twelve –year-old girl, is lost in the street.

she is of medium height with short hair. she has a round face and small eyes. she wears a pair of

glasses. she wears a white shirt, a pair of blue jeans and a pair of black sports shoes.

if anyone knows her, please call mr. green at 26458132. thanks a lot.

unit 10 i’d like some noodles.

?my favorite food》

iam a middle school student. i like to eat healthy food. i have milk, eggs and bread for breakfast. for lunch i would like rice, fish and vegetables. i like chicken, juice, rice and hamburgers for supper. of all the food, my favorite food is chicken and apple juice.

unit 11 how was your school trip

i had a busy weekend. on saturday morning, i did my homework, and then i played computer games. in the afternoon, i visited my grandmother. we talked for a long time.

on sunday morning, i cleaned my room and did some reading. then i cooked for m parents. in the

afternoon, i watched a football match on tv and listened to music. i had a good time.

unit 12 what did you do last weekend

my friend li hua came to visit me on may day. during the following days i showed him around the city. we went to the guangzhou museum on the morning of may 2. we learned much about the history of guangzhou. in the afternoon., we climbed the baiyun hills. it was really great fun! in the evening. i took li hua to the night zoo. it was interesting to see animals at night. the next day, we went to the bookshops to buy books. though we were very tired, we enjoyed ourselves very much.

英语我作文篇4

一、指代方面的错误

在使用代词it，he，this，that，which，one等时，前文中应出现明确的先行词。

如：since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future，it is senseless to force him to learn it.，这句话中，him和it这两个代词都有明确的先行词，分别是a child和knowledge，因此句子的含义非常清楚。

可是，不少学生在使用这些代词时，虽然自己很清楚它们指代的是什么，但在作文中却没有交代清楚，结果这些代词非但没有使行文简洁，反而造成了意思上的模糊，让阅卷老师不知所云。

误：sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.

正：sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.

?说明】句1中的they既可指教师，也可指学生，属指代不清的。可以把它们中的任意一个改成单数名词。因为单数名词也可以泛指一类。

二、修饰方面的错误

修饰语应紧靠被修饰的成分，并和它形成正确的逻辑关系。如果修饰语的位置不妥当，就会造出模棱两可的病句。

误：to keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

正：to keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.

?说明】句1要表达的是把有害气体排放到农村，还是把工厂迁到农村去？显然修饰语to the countryside的'位置放错了。如句2改变一下结构，就能清楚地表达要表达的意思了。

三、一致方面的错误

在一个句子内部或紧邻的两三个句子之间，要保持时态、人称、数等的一致。

误：whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

正：whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.

?说明】代词应与所指代的先行词保持人称和数上的一致。句1也可改成whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

四、平行结构方面的错误

这里专指语态、比较级、非谓语形式、冠词用法、可数名词和不可数名词、不定代词单复数以及时态等错误。

1、误：narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.

正：narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)

误：a great change has been taken place since then.

正：a great change has taken place since then.

误：but it may occur some new problems.

正：but some new problems may occur/arise.

误：opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.

正：opportunities only belong to those who work hard.

?说明】happen，take place，occur，arise等动词和动词词组一般既不能用作被动结构，也不能作为及物动词带宾语的。但学生作文中类似的错误较多：our country has taken place a great change in many fields.

2、误：the pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.

正：the pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.

误：electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.

正：electricity is the most important power in our daily life.

误：thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.

正：thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.

?说明】这些都是在使用比较形式时出现的错误。尤其是第1例较普遍。如more easier，more stronger等。

五、断句方面的错误

一句句子没有结束，又开始新的一句，结果造成句子结构不全，这就成为断句。

误：tv becomes an important part in our daily life. because we cannot live without it.

正：tv becomes an important part in our daily life，because we cannot live without it.

?说明】以because，since，if等引导的从句是不能独立成句的，只能依属于主句，所以不能写成另一句。

六、连词方面的错误

作文中缺少必要的连词，或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。

误：one should improve his english，one should overcome difficulties in studies.

正：if one wants to improve his english，he should overcome difficulties in studies.

?说明】学生在写作中往往意识不到连词的重要，不善于使用连词和连接副词来明确标示出因果关系、转折关系、递进关系等。

七、搭配方面的错误

学生作文中用词搭配方面的错误也占有较大比例。曾经在一次六级作文阅卷中，近千篇作文在表达上海交通越来越拥挤这个意思时，几乎没有一篇用 heavier，大多数人用的是the traffic in shanghai is getting more and more crowded，而traffic是不能与crowded搭配的。

1、误：however the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.

正：however the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.

?说明】speed只能和high，low，good，top，normal，fantastic，moderate，surprising等搭配，不能与fast，quick，slow搭配。但可以这样说a car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.

2、误：in the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

正：in the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.

?说明】price只和high，low，inflated，moderate，minimum，original，popular，prevailing，published，reduced，reasonable等搭配，不能与expensive，cheap搭配，但可以说in the past，milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.

由此可见，要提高对词语搭配的驾驭能力，除了要在平时的阅读过程中多积累，还需要克服中文中诸如速度快、价格贵、学习知识、人减少等搭配的影响，避免写出look book或see book这样的笑话来。

八、误用方面

学生作文中对词语的误用也相当普遍，误用词语不仅不能准确地表达作者的意思，而且也会闹出笑话。

1、误：with the industrious development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

正：with the industrial development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

2、误：most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.

正：most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.

?说明】以上错句都是因为对形容词的辨析不清而造成的。industrious是勤劳的，工业上的应为industrial。effect一般用作名词，其动词形式表示产生、实现，而这里的意思是影响，应换成affect。

以上就是一秘为大家带来的10篇《英语分析作文》，能够给予您一定的参考与启发，是一秘的价值所在。

英语我作文篇5

our government has called on the people to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life. we middle school students should do something for it.

to save food, we shouldn’t waste any of our food. we should eat up all the food. we shouldn’t order the food more than we can eat while dining out, because many people in the world don’t have enough to eat. to eat healthily, we shouldn’t eat junk food but healthy food. it’s good for our health to eat a balanced diet. we’d better not eat in small restaurants. the food and the oil they use are not clean or healthy enough. we’d better eat at school or at home if we have time.

英语我作文篇6

with the development of technology, bicycle sharing comes into people's lives. it becomes more and more popular and much news reported it. at the same time, we should see that there are some problemscaused by bicycle sharing.

on one side, bicycle sharing makes it very convenient of people traveling. you can find a bicycle anywhere at any time when you want to go out for a cycling, and the price of one trip is very low. it can save time for people. on the other side, its management is not perfect. even kids can open the lock and ride the bicycle, there is no doubt that such behavior is very dangerous. what's more, many people deliberately break it, like throw it to the river or destroy the code above it.

in my opinion, we should take a developing view about bicycle sharing. it is obviously helpful to human beings as a high-tech product. the government should introduce relevant provisions to regulate this market to avoid its disadvantages.

英语我作文篇7

the spring festival is very important to chinese people. in the past，people could not often have meat，rice or other delicious food. they could only eat these during the spring festival. so every year they hoped that the spring festival would come soon. now， although people‘s life is much better，and we can eat the delicious foods everyday. people still like the festival. because most people can have a long holiday，and we are free to go on a trip or visit our friends or have parties with our family. in the evenings，we can have a big meal in the restaurant or stay at home with family and watch the tv programs.

过年对中国人来说非常重要。在过去，人们往往没有肉，大米或其他美味的食物吃。他们通常只能在过年吃到这些。所以每年他们都希望过年可以快点来。现在，虽然人们的生活好多了，我和家人每天都可以吃美味的食物。人们仍然喜欢的过年。因为大多数人可以有一个很长的假期，我和家人可以自由地去旅行或拜访我和家人的朋友或与我和家人的家人聚会。晚上，我和家人可以在餐厅大吃一顿，或与家人留在家里看电视节目。

i like the spring festival very much. how wonderful the spring festival is！

我非常喜欢过年。过年是多么的美妙啊！

英语我作文篇8

yao ming is one of the best-known chinese playing .let's go to look he .heis 34 years old .he was born in chinese.

what does he look like ?he looks very strong ,he have black hair and smalleyes .the eyes are look very beactiful. he looks friendly and kind ,but sometimehe is very strict .what is he like ?he often smiles, he is polite and sometimehe is quiet .what is he happy like ?he likes playing computer games andlistening to music.he likes running and playing football .he began to practiseplaying basketball at the age of 9. he loves animals and he likes helping others.he often gives a lot of money to help poor children in china .many people likeshim very much.

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